My Reflections
Thursday, 7 August 2008
Hi this is my first refection and we have just finished are third rotion whitch was cooking.We cooked things whitch could help me when i have to cook.
In I.T we are donig a a powerponit on climite change whitch will help us to learn
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August 23rd, 2008 at 8:41 pm
spelling ………. reflection not ‘refection’, which not ‘whitch’ and doing not ‘donig’, and the first sentence should read ‘ just finished our third rotation’. we will have to do some spelling in the holidays, do you have spelling at school? rather the publish this Braiden, you could just fix it up maybe. hope so. Oh and I just noticed, powerpoint not ‘powerponit’.
August 23rd, 2008 at 8:44 pm
oh! i just noticed i made an error, should read ‘rather ‘than’ publish’.
September 1st, 2008 at 9:38 pm
I think this should be Braiden and Lizzies Blog. Hope you two are having fun!
Sending you all lots of Hugs.
Best Wishes, Carn
September 2nd, 2008 at 11:44 pm
well done to you braiden for publishing my comment on all the spelling errors! i was only trying to help you, well, because you know why! spelling correctly is just one of my ‘things’. the ‘B AND L’ blog idea is not such a bad idea, what do you think? i could also teach you some cooking and we could share it with those other readers of your blog.
September 8th, 2008 at 4:24 pm
G’day Braiden,
I agree with Lizzie. Perhaps you should be checking your spelling more carefully before posting or writing a comment. This term I will be starting to formally assess you on your blogs. How well you write posts and comments, whether you have interesting posts with hyperlinks and images, whether you give attribution to the images and how well you reply to those readers who have commented.
By the way, have you been leaving comments on some of the websites you have in your blogroll? You could be writing posts about these websites and adding a hyperlink to them in your post.
September 8th, 2008 at 4:25 pm
Just a blogging question – where is the link to “Recent comments” on your sidebar? This makes it easier for me to find out who is commenting on your blog.
October 15th, 2008 at 12:37 pm
Have you reflected on why the holdens did so badly at Bathurst? I would be happy to read your thoughts! I know you will be very sad.
November 14th, 2008 at 4:22 pm
Hi Braiden,
I am called Rahul and I live in The Netherlands.
I really love cars, mainly I love Ferraris.
I like your blog and I like the image at the top.
Bye…
(Please comment back)
http://ishrahul.edublogs.org/
February 20th, 2009 at 9:26 am
I guess that you like to watch ‘top gear’ on television? Would that be right? It would be good if you did a report on some of your favourite segments from the show. I rather like one of the presenters!
March 5th, 2009 at 10:34 pm
Hello again Braiden, do you like making up car models? Maybe you have some and could post some photos of the ones you have made, it would be interesting to see them.
June 17th, 2009 at 12:22 am
Hello Braiden, it is a while since i last visited your blog and I note that you have made a few changes to it, lots more photos of cars and it is now easy to see that you have updated and if you have new comments. Well done to you! I have noticed a few ’spelling’ errors, but then i am a bit fussy about correct spelling! Have you been to any recent motor race meetings? Tell us about it if you have and who won.
June 22nd, 2009 at 5:00 pm
i am just making a visit to see if there were any new posts about motor racing. there has been so much of it on recently and i guess you have been watching on television. I am also enjoying the music, ‘the thrill of it’ !!!!! well some of it anyway!!!!!!
June 26th, 2009 at 9:38 pm
oh, i do like the new cartoon image of you with your ferrari !!!!!!!!
maybe instead of the navy blue rolls royce for my old age, i may get to ride in a ferrari, a red, fast one!!!!!!!